Points that need to be edited to thesis
Introduction –    local and global statistics about this topic is essential for example: you have to mention the new Saudi Law that forces the private sector to provide insurance to the employees, `this means every worker must be insured, adding some percentages would bring value to the thesis .
Literature review – stick to one referencing style you have APA and numerical please use one only – Add an international or global perspective to be able to compare with what is going on around the world. Is it good to have both local and global viewpoints in your literature. The current literature is not comprehensive for a thesis. Two pages are not sufficient. – Content related to barriers, motivators, and the remaining questions in your survey are essential Discussion –    in the discussion comparing and contrasting your results is needed. You have many domains that were not discussed and you mainly used African studies. Including studies from our region, Middle East, GCC is recommended in addition to other global studies with at least similar health insurance situation –    Write Recommendations
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( convert all table to Graphs from Question 2 to 14 ) –    some of the insurance related questions can be displayed and used in a meaningful way as graphs, you have a lot of informative content, using some of it in graphs per variable can be very interesting.