Health & Wealth Then, write 2-3 paragraphs where you:
give your perspective on the relationship between health and wealth
support your perspective with facts and/or opinions explain how your core values affect your perspective on health and wealth demonstrate the grammar and writing skills covered in the previous week Part 2: please use a sentence from part 1
Review the original and revised sentences your classmates and comment on the effectiveness of the revisions. Here are a few things you might consider when writing your responses:
Do the revisions make the original sentence more concise? If so, how? If not, suggest an alternative revision.
Does the revised sentence accurately capture the meaning of the original sentence? If not, mention why and/or suggest an alternative revision.
What insight about concise writing have you gained by reviewing your classmate’s post?
What insight might you offer your classmate regarding concise writing?